Friday, May 17, 2013

Better than A Shadow


When you stand in your shadow,
You see a companion for yourself.
Someone you wish will never leave you,
will walk with your step forever.

But this shadow is also there,
With you only in light.
When darkness dawns,
Even a part of you leaves you behind.

But I promise to follow,
Never to judge, to be your rock,
When the tides crash harder.
And harder still, I’ll be there to hold your hand.

Like quick sand, time will seep.
We may grow, distance, fall apart,
But all through that, I promise,
I’ll be better than that betraying shadow.

Love cannot be asked for,
Our love cannot be judged.
But when it is furnished and when it is true,
No question arises,
And we stand still,
In this quickening sand.

9 comments:

Unknown said...

Dear Srish,

This is wonderful poem..your thoughts and your sensibilities to the subtle human relationships amaze me.

Love you my little girl!!
Bharti

PatentAgent_priyanka said...

Indeed deep thoughts...So well written!!!

PatentAgent_priyanka said...

Indeed deep thoughts...So well written!!!

Taruna Goel said...

Dear Srish, As always... beautiful thoughts and amazing observations about life. Fantastic!
Cheers
T

Meenali said...

Excellent thoughts srishti and very well written!

Srishti said...

Thank you so much for all the encouragement!!!! :D

Snigdha Rai said...

I. Read. It. First. :D :D

Seriously, Srish, you make me feel so proud, it hurts. It's like all my worries just vanish even before they come.

Loved it!

Srishti said...

Aww thank you so much Snigdha! It is your encouragement and constant support that keeps me writing!

Sudhir Birla said...

Tu jahan jahan chalega, mera saya sath hoga.... Kya poem hai