Saturday, October 13, 2012

Journey



A new silence has been found
with that, comes a new sound
Dawned upon you is the life of possibility 
and the world is not short of amiability

We all are rocking in the same boat
trying hard to stay afloat
But this journey can be fun
when you let yourself shine
under the golden Sun

Leaving footprints in the sand
walking together hand in hand
There is not a doubt
of rain from this glistening cloud

And when it pours
we will always find an open door
A helping hand to get us through
make us better and brand new

We must learn to return the favour
by passing it to another who needs to add flavour
In our lives we must learn 
that giving can also be fun

It is when we give from our heart
can we instill a beautiful fresh start
For you and for me
and for everyone to see!




Feel free to leave all your comments and views! They keep me motivated and help me get better! Thank you, and I'll be excited to get back and read your views! :)

9 comments:

Anonymous said...

that's really nice, srishti....nd i really like the line 'make us better and brand new'!

Anonymous said...

that's really nice, srishti....nd i really like the line 'make us better and brand new'!* I am kanishk aggrawal

Meenali said...

Wonderful poem srishti...very sweetly written!Good use of words!keep writing!manu maasi

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Srishti said...

Thank you so much for your appriciation @Kanishk and Massi! :)

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Anonymous said...

Giving can also be a Fun to make a beautiful fresh start. This is one little thing this generation should learn so that they can come out of their shell and enjoy the bliss of togetherness. Well written poem sristi. keep it up!!!

Srishti said...

Thank you so much! Do I get to know who the anonymous commenter is? :)

Anonymous said...

I have read quite a few poems of your's now. Post me a nice story or an article.